tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1360520401699868849.post6696032915840460766..comments2018-02-17T08:05:17.960-08:00Comments on Words From The Parsonage: Andria Helmhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18391281281713955098noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1360520401699868849.post-36893691094684987982010-08-11T04:25:42.616-07:002010-08-11T04:25:42.616-07:00I missed this on Saturday. I enjoyed the piece an...I missed this on Saturday. I enjoyed the piece and can't believe it ended up being the first entry in your blog. How sweet is that? Thank you for taking part of what turned out to be a dynamite event!!!DL Hammonshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02007260062331783715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1360520401699868849.post-20125544700995711242010-08-10T11:19:37.662-07:002010-08-10T11:19:37.662-07:00Congratulations! Good work! Glad to read the comme...Congratulations! Good work! Glad to read the comments of others as well - I too think this is very timely. Keep writing!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01739857145252613233noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1360520401699868849.post-33644999421286503552010-08-08T14:38:58.094-07:002010-08-08T14:38:58.094-07:00You captured the mind-wanderings of a person lost ...You captured the mind-wanderings of a person lost in the uncertainty of transition. As can happen with first person narrations, I found myself a bit lost when the narrator didn't introduce herself. (The first time I read through this, I thought the POV was male. Quite a different story played out in my imagination :D) Upon the second read through, I sorted out the characters much more successfully, and found a more intimate connection with the main character.<br /><br />I second what Amanda said. This piece was relevant and timely, with a character many readers will, undoubtedly, identify with. <br /><br />Thanks for sharing your work!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01899768909313326172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1360520401699868849.post-55116393807229016092010-08-08T00:10:54.943-07:002010-08-08T00:10:54.943-07:00Both an adventurous and lush piece of drama, which...Both an adventurous and lush piece of drama, which also manages to go along with our current economic times. I'm glad I stopped by!<br /><br />Extra points for it taking place in the great state of Texas. <3Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com